Wednesday, October 20, 2010

First Final

1 comment:

  1. Shannon,

    I love the moment that was captured but I miss a bit of the information on the right with the girl just noticing all of this happening. Also be careful of the extremely narrow crop where it looks as though his foot MIGHT be chopped.

    If you can open up the composition again this could be a really nice piece to try selective coloration. Using the same color sense you have created for then man, the girl and the pigeons. You could even consider slightly de-saturating everything else to create a greater pull between the elements.

    P.S. Could you post the progress you've been making on the hallway silhouette piece.
    You have created such a strong sense of drama and mystery in that one, I'm really excited to see how your work continues to grow.